100 Word Challenge Week #5

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By  Dion                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                         

                                 My Treasure                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                     My grandparents gave it to me when I  was seven. I liked how  it's brown-white fur went around  my lower leg as it purred with joy.  It would always protect the house from other animals.I was worried that he would get lost or beaten down. His personality stand ed out of them all.He was nice , wasn't diseased and  he wouldn't bite you if he was displeased, but unfortunately I had to go.I  couldn't bring him to my  front door,by the way I couldn't live in  my foreign country everyday  . So I said bye and  went away.I'll never forget when I met him that day.                

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  1. Unknown14 October 2017 at 12:12

    I am guessing that this is a pet cat. You have some great language such a s purred with joy and he wouldn't bite you if he was displease. Some parts almost rhyme and read like a poem. Writing your 100 words as a poem might be more effective. I am confused about the part bringing him to the front door.

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    1. Unknown23 October 2017 at 19:47

      Dionne is talking about the cat he had when visited grandparents , he couldn't bring it home.

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